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[CrimsonZ]

You've definetely got talent!

Dude don't give up on this! You've got some good guitar skill (better than me anyways). The thing you really should work on is mixing your parts and trying to add a few things here and there to really spice things up a bit (like some extra guitar sounds to build up the next pattern or something). Worst thing hear is that you didn't spend nearly enough time on the drums (really you just need better drum sounds) and the bass guitar, they can add a WHOLE lot of you try to make them sound dead sexy.

Otherwise it sounds pretty sweet, if you keep at it you can sound like BESERKYD some day!

Catboi responds:

Thanks for the review, I agree with you. You pretty much pointed out what I felt about it. The drums could do with mixing in properly and some processing. I would also like to get them seeming more organic. I frequently neglect the bass in my songs, it is something I definately need to work on improving. thanks again XD

[Mexican Apple Thief]

I don't even know

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Screw it

It was interesting :|

JaShinYa responds:

Successfully brain ninja'ed!

[TI:.Robots Unleashed-RD2011]

SWEET! EXCELLENT DUBSTEP!

Dude once that robot sound came in along with your wobble bass I knew you were a well deserved front page get! Excellent job here, I love the melody the sound and pretty much everything here! Sweet intro sounds too and especially sexy drop. Please keep making music, because we'll you're excellent at it.

TIMarbury responds:

thanks man this means a lot, a review like this really inspires great work, for real thanks!

[=Blessing=]

Pretty sweet!

I really like your sounds here they sound pretty awesome and they're honestly daring to me (with your grand piano break and REALLY detuned pad, but it all worked really well). Though I do believe it could do with a little better mixing and mastering, I felt like there was a lot of noise going on in this song for whatever reason. You should really try cutting out alot more frequencies that aren't need for certain instruments. But overall you have awesome sounds going here and you should definetely keep trying!

Daydream-Anatomy responds:

Thank you:]

[Bad Blood]

Broheim...

You are awesome, I decided to listen to this too after I looked at your newest song. Great work here dude! You are doing a great job on the heavy metal front here. Just keep making good music man, I can't really complain about this one lol.

I was hoping to give some criticism but oh well :P

BERSERKYD responds:

Yeaaaa ! You such a nice guy. Thanks Bud. |m/,

[The Dark Templar Symphony]

Excellent! Super talent!

Dude I think this sounds great! You got some great guitar skills and there's some awesome sounds going on here! Your drums sound pretty sweet too!

The only thing here I could complain about is that you should try to mix a little more, I noticed some ducking going on with the volumes on the drums when the 2nd guitar came in. But really it sounds excellent, keep making great music!

Also the voices are a great touch.

BERSERKYD responds:

Great thanks for the great feed back ! Not perfect but I think its my best mixe so far in 4 years. Don'T worry I'll keep rocking man. Cheer :D

[Saving The Sunset]

Great melodies and work here!

I like how you've treated your melodies here and your love of the actual mood and feelings from it (all assumed from your ator coments though lol). This is a good song, the thing I'm most concerned about is that your actual instruments probably could sound better with mixing and such or maybe even searching for some better soundfonts (I have no idea what you're using). But I think you can make the actual instrumentation sound better somehow if you tried really hard, the melodies themselves though are excellent.

Also don't be afraid to throw in some infrequent drums hits to add a nice effect to things, you don't ever have to be satisfied with the bare bones song you can try whatever you want and throw things in wherever.

Veneox responds:

I am using Mixcraft 5.2 and am using the best I can afford.

[Project 22]

This is pretty sweet!

I like this alot! It's got a cool style, if you try to learn some more and twerk some things up you could get this from sweet to incredible in no time. You got some cool beats and sounds here, I think the next step for you is really trying to mix it better (personally I think the low frequencies are a little heavy kind of blocking out the mids and highs). I personally have learned alot from Youtube and Fruity Loop's amazing coolstuff files that I can pick through and see how they did what they did.

You got talent though, I think you should really try to push it now and go for something even better.

Rinileki14 responds:

I'm glad you like it. I'm kind of still getting the hang of mixing and mastering. Thanks for reviewing!

[Sly Taco]

You got skill, now really try to use it

This ain't that bad. You made a halfway descent beat and changed it up plenty. But I don't really hear any mixing or any bravery to jump out and fill out the beat all the way. I mean the way it's going right now it's more like a background loop (a good one though), but listen to the top songs of the week or whatever and you'll see they try to change the general song up to make it more interesting. You got the cool beat but now you need to kick in something heavier and have some more instruments go all out. Just look at other peoples stuff and see how they did it and try what you like.

I like what you got going here though, it sounds like you could really be excellent if you worked harder. Good luck dude.

kooness responds:

yeah i agree. thanks for the advice

[The Other Side - DJ Bacon]

I feel bad about this.

For some reason, I hate to say it, but this totally reminds me of the stuff I used to make where it didn't sound like it was mixed very well (I actually didn't mix at all back then) and it was cool notes and stuff but it all was really jumbled and loud because of the things I hadn't learned yet.

Great song, but you should totally try and increase your knowledge, it always helps you get better.

Bacon92 responds:

This is actually true I am in the same position as you: I worked on this a while back ago when I was rather unexperienced in FL Studio and did not know how to mix. Thanks for bringing this up, I also had a prelude to this piece that I never got around to posting; what I think I will do is resubmit this remastered with the prelude.