I feel like the only thing missing is like some sort of break or change of pace in... the pacing. It was so commonly your voice and in the same tone it needed like a joke or two that required silence or something totally different (the wonka joke was the closest you got but I got the joke already and you just kept going with it lol).

Dude I love this! It was such adorable animation! Why does this have such low votes?!

Absolutely Brilliant

This is has easily become my favorite flash. You're one of the only artist I've seen who actually seemed to like using silence and buildup in your movie. Plus the animation was simple yet REALLY effective and I liked the touch of changing the aspect ratio to a more claustrophobic look inside the house. I also liked how much this seems inspired by the Shining lol. Seriously this was amazing, and I would love to see more animations with such a cinematic sensibility to them to make you forget your watching watching a flash in the first place, just that you're seeing a story.

I actually really like this! Even though it seems like just bubble bobble, I really like how its more physics based so that your timing and skill is more important!

As much as I like that you made a fully functioning pong, this begs for some modern imagination. I guess if you just called it pong I'd be cool, but v2 makes me wish there was some twist to the game. Like Plasma pong.

Wow really good usage of synths and chord progressions building to a nice sort of laid back beat.

I really don't have much to say, it was pretty nice to listen to.

Uh.... how did you make those cool synths? Did you program them yourself?

Uh...... What's your number? Can I make love to you?
I mean its not relevant but I have to put something in the review other than "yeah it was good"

Wow not bad! This has been an interesting day of reviewing for me, lots of good artists, and I even found you someone who I wouldn't say is at the tip top but you clearly are learning.

Really REALLY good usage of chords, key, melodies. Memorable and fun to listen to.

I think the main thing you probably should work on is your mixing and mastering. I know that's a complicated subject but it can be learned. Try to imitate other styles that you like more.

Also those drums are cool but I think they should vary a little more and probably should've been either tweaked or had different samples all together. (It's beginning for more minimalist like clicks and boops, with reverb and delay or something).

Besides that really good for what (I'm guessing) is your level! It reminds me of my music back in 2011 lol.

Amazing art! He must be good if you wanted to do sick cover art like this for him. Reminds me of a like an animeish version of digikid