I feel like the only thing missing is like some sort of break or change of pace in... the pacing. It was so commonly your voice and in the same tone it needed like a joke or two that required silence or something totally different (the wonka joke was the closest you got but I got the joke already and you just kept going with it lol).
Dude I love this! It was such adorable animation! Why does this have such low votes?!
This is has easily become my favorite flash. You're one of the only artist I've seen who actually seemed to like using silence and buildup in your movie. Plus the animation was simple yet REALLY effective and I liked the touch of changing the aspect ratio to a more claustrophobic look inside the house. I also liked how much this seems inspired by the Shining lol. Seriously this was amazing, and I would love to see more animations with such a cinematic sensibility to them to make you forget your watching watching a flash in the first place, just that you're seeing a story.
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