Great melody!
You have an awesome melody going here with some pretty cool synths and that's totally worth something! The next thing for you I think is just pushing it a little further, this song is beginning for a few more synths to add on. Don't be afraid to throw in something new during the song, you might find an even better melody or sound.
Also I'm gonna tell you what slappmeddo (or however you spell his friggin' name) told me back then: Don't be afraid to layer sounds together. Specifically I'm talking about your drums sounds, there's nothing wrong with a basic beat but the sounds themselves aren't cutting it. The clap and the open hat definetely need some work, and throwing another higher clap or a sharper hat on top of those sounds could really do the trick!
Great song though keep it up!