Free2Play's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[3. In A Tired Heap]

Stellar voice acting!

It's very hard to pull off drama like this, and the fx touches were really nice.

The poem was pretty sweet too!

I hope someone else reviews this track who knows a bit more about voice acting and poems lol. But I'll go ahead and scout you at least.

entertheegg responds:

Yeah, she did a really good job! Thanks for the review and scout

[Children of Saturn]

Sweet dude! I really like your use of different synths to capture the atmosphere. That's one thing I'm not particularly good at.

If I were to make any compliant it'd be that the 2nd half is not varied enough for it to really wow you by the end. It's a bit recycled by that point. Other than that I love it!

JoshuaHughes responds:

Thanks for the review! These are really helping me get a lot better a lot faster. Gotcha on the 2nd half. I'll make a mental note of it.

[Buttpoop]

I just realized that you're the same person who did the praise the sun song so I immediately fanned you lol.

[Do It]

Cool stuff dude! Way above my level lol.

Also that episode was baller.

[Somewhere Here Pickle131]

I really like this, its far more creative than a lot of the things I hear on NG. You tried a lot of strange stylings and the japanese vocals are super refreshing, that girl really has talent.

But I have to say I'm not a fan of the reverb quality on the instruments, nor am I a fan of some of the instruments. The flute was good at the end, and the piano is fine for the most part, but the bass seemed strange to me, and the snapping was a bit loud.

Also the vocals give that close feel like an acoustic song, so the reverb on all the instruments give the wrong vibe in contrast to the vocals.

You want it to sound a bit closer like she's singing in the same room with a few simple instruments being played.

It makes me want to listen to a J Rabbit track, which is much more close and personal like the singers voice is.

Keep making music dude! This is really good especially compared to a lot of the more unoriginal tracks on NG!

[Dog Town]

Wish I could help on making it louder. I feel like its loud enough to me. It has a cool sound going on, like an industrial urban chaotic type sound. Its cool.

[Hanging On]

Sweet dude, I like this. It doesn't vary too far from the original, but its nice to see how you can master and mix vocals with some synths.

[Dance of the Groovy Dragon]

Dang dude you're like the 5th song today that's actually pretty good that i've reviewed lol.

Nice use of the cloud pad wav by the way lol.

The only thing I can say is that maybe you should've changed up the chord progression or instrumentation more at the 3rd minute. Also changing the beat to halftime at some point may have helped spice it up.

I guess I would've liked to hear it build up to a bit more full chorus somewhere. With a few more instruments, or another synth taking the melody. You know more stuff.

Keep making music dude!

VideoGameManiac responds:

Thank you for the kind review!
Im actually not a fan of "adding more" since I like to keep my tracks as simple as possible but theres always room for improvement of course and I appreciate your ideas! :D